Hourglass response

[lmondegreen.livejournal.com]

My first drabble!



The cell door doesn’t close with a ‘clang’, like I imagined. Instead, a ‘click’ seals my fate. I look at my home for the next ten years; all I see on the walls, bed, sink, bars, is his face as he keeps me warm, as he turns me in, as he saves my life only to let my soul die in this concrete hell.

*****

Funny how eternity can pass in a heartbeat. I revel in the wind on my face, the sun, the freedom like a glass of pure, fresh water. I can do anything, go anywhere.

He’s in Chicago.

Comments

[darthfox.livejournal.com]

oooh. (say it again. mufasa.)

:-)

EEEEEEEEEEEEE

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

Oh, this is so great.

[duesouthficrecs.livejournal.com]

Oh my.

That was a perfect, canon use of the challenge, and I bet it killed one heck of a plot bunny.

I think you captured Victoria's tormented soul perfectly, and in just 100 words. Wow.

[dracostella.livejournal.com]

Oooooo! I like, I like.
There needs to be more Victoria fics! I mean I always thought what Fraser did with locking her up and everything, most women would plot revenge... *hmm... perhaps I said too much*
Very nice 100 words!

Re:

[lmondegreen.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I'm not extremely fond of Victoria, but she just seemed to pop into my head for this one...

[jenboo.livejournal.com]

oooooohhhh....(cue Dragnet theme)

Muy interesante....

Re: Hourglass response

[yeungmaisu.livejournal.com]

Ooh, it's as if no time has gone by. Chilling.

[mergatrude.livejournal.com]

Oh wow! Definitely shivery. Brrrrrr.

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

Oh, excellent! What a perfect use of the challenge! Way cool!