ext_12399 ([identity profile] ardent-muses.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction2003-05-08 10:26 pm

How happy am I?

Very happy. Kellie wrote a drabble for this challenge and she's letting me post it. :)

100 words.


Wrong
c. 2003 Kellie Matthews.

His hands were all wrong: fingers too short, palm too broad. But they were all he had. It was hard though, to imagine they were . . . other. Hard to imagine the hand stroking up his shaft, sliding the foreskin over the head and back was one with long fingers, narrow palms, recurved thumbs. To imagine the rough catch of bitten nails and ragged cuticles.

It helped to close his eyes, arch his hips upward, speed the strokes, and see in his mind's eye a quirky grin and brilliant eyes, imagine how that stubble would feel against him.

Oh God.

So right.
ext_6455: (hmmm)

[identity profile] doll-revolution.livejournal.com 2003-05-08 10:05 pm (UTC)(link)
oh, jeez, that's good. damn good, in fact.

and nothing personal, ardent, but i wish you hadn't been the inspiration. :::sigh::: i just like my angst to end happily.
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[identity profile] shayheyred.livejournal.com 2003-05-09 10:03 am (UTC)(link)
Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.
Fraser has an excellent imagination.

[identity profile] bluster.livejournal.com 2003-05-09 03:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Leave it to Ardent to inspire you to smut. Not that you *need* anyone to inspire you. :-)

[identity profile] cesperanza.livejournal.com 2003-05-10 01:43 pm (UTC)(link)
This is a really great snapshot, and the line, "But they were all he had." gave this tiny story a sudden, deep sad resonance. Thanks so much for sharing!