Cave In Challenge- by shoemaster

Title: Caving
Author: Allison/[livejournal.com profile] shoemaster
Word Count: 513
Rating: NC-17
Notes: Loosest definition of a cave in ever, but there is porn? A thousand thanks to [livejournal.com profile] kalpurna who ignored homework to poke the porn, and [livejournal.com profile] hermionemalfoy who tried to get me to think of a real title, but it's 1 am and I'm tired, y0.

"Fraser, we shouldn’t be doing this here."

"Oh, I agree, Ray."

"Then, uh, oh, fuck-" Ray let out a long sigh. "As long as we agree this is a bad idea."

"Absolutely terrible."

It wasn’t Ray’s fault that Fraser had come in to the station thirty minutes ago, or that he’d sat with him at the desk for thirty minutes, twitching for twenty eight, before he snapped and hauled Ray off to the supply closet. It wasn’t Fraser’s fault, either. The black jeans that Ray was wearing were quite fetching, and certainly drew the eye. Perhaps he had gotten a bit carried away, but they were already in the closet and Fraser had Ray pressed up against the supply racks, his shirt pulled out of his waistband and the top two buttons undone.

"Fraser. Fraser. Fraser," Ray panted.

"Yes, Ray?" Fraser lifted his mouth away from the pulse of Ray’s neck but kept his hand wrapped around Ray’s cock, still half inside his boxers.

"Don’t—ah—don’t stop."

"Understood." Fraser continued to stroke him, thumb sliding over the head of his cock as Ray’s head slammed back against the metal shelves, hips thrusting forward into Fraser’s hand.

Ray bit his lip when Fraser’s hand did the little twisty thing, and his fingertips brushed lightly against the skin of his balls. He could hear and feel Fraser panting against his neck and jeez, that was almost as hot as the thumb thing.

It was over quickly, an unfortunate consequence of their location, and Ray came, spilling into Fraser’s handkerchief, shoulders striking the shelves once more.

Apparently the shelves had had their fill of abuse and let loose an avalanche of office supplies; staplers, reams of paper, light bulbs…everything.

"Jesus!" Ray yelled, trying to dodge the falling objects, but his movements were hampered by the post-coital languidness of his muscles.

"What’s going on in there, you two?" Welsh demanded before yanking open the door, letting light spill in over the two of them and the toppled supplies.

Ray panicked a moment, before he realized Fraser and his brilliant hands had already managed to tuck him away and rebutton his pants. Fuckin’ amazing hands.

"I tripped, sir, unfortunately causing Detective Vecchio to fall into the shelving, which, in turn, had the unfortunate consequence of disrupting the items that formerly rested upon them."

"Of course. See if you can manage to excavate him and get back to work on the Hansman case some time today, huh?"

"Of course, Lieutenant."

The door shut once more, and Ray let out a nervous breath. "You lied, Fraser."

"A white lie, perhaps, but I was the cause of your forceful interaction with the-"

"Fraser."

"I suppose we ought to return to your desk, then."

"You gonna be okay, with uh, things?"

"I’ll manage."

***

Five minutes later

"Hey, Vecchio, where’s Red?" Huey asked, dropping a stack of files on Ray’s desk.

"Bathroom."

"Huh. What happened to your neck? You got some kinda bruise."

"Supply closet," Ray answered, keeping his eyes focused on the form in front of him. "Cave-in. Falling, uh, stapler."

[identity profile] lucifercircle.livejournal.com 2006-11-20 08:33 am (UTC)(link)
*snickers*
I don't mind this kind of cave-in. Very funny. Yay for porn! But shame on you for leaving Fraser to... take matters into his own hands.

[identity profile] elementalv.livejournal.com 2006-11-20 10:26 am (UTC)(link)
Totally loose cave-in, totally loose Fraser and Kowalski. These two things together make me a very happy camper.

[identity profile] the_antichris.livejournal.com 2006-11-20 10:46 am (UTC)(link)
Yay! Hilarious supply-closet porn! (Is there a sequel where Ray follows Fraser to the bathroom and puts the partitions in danger?)

[identity profile] bertybertle.livejournal.com 2006-11-20 12:12 pm (UTC)(link)
*giggles* This is fun! Lovely twist on the challenge.

[identity profile] llassah.livejournal.com 2006-11-20 12:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Hee hee hee, I don't think I'll ever be tired of supply closet sex, especially when there's a cave-in involved *g*. Also, the idea of Fraser being unable to resist Ray's, uh, charms is a wonderful one- him caving in (see what I did there? See?) has to be one of my favorite fic plots. Lovely, hot and funny. And Ray's save at the end? priceless.

[identity profile] slidellra.livejournal.com 2006-11-20 01:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! That's a wonderful story to wake up to, and the dialogue at the end is brilliant.

[identity profile] slidellra.livejournal.com 2006-11-20 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
I was wondering! I thought maybe I had magical wish-fic-into-existence superpowers. And, apparently, I do. Cool.

ext_20943: (OMG)

[identity profile] sam80853.livejournal.com 2006-11-20 03:32 pm (UTC)(link)
::giggles::

Oh Fraser ... "I tripped, sir, unfortunately causing Detective Vecchio to fall into the shelving, which, in turn, had the unfortunate consequence of disrupting the items that formerly rested upon them." ... and poor thing, he has to be in the bathroom all-alone, shame! Shame!

GREAT!
eledhwenlin: (Default)

[personal profile] eledhwenlin 2006-11-20 03:47 pm (UTC)(link)
*snickers* Cute. :)
ext_2366: (by sdwolfpup: the other ray (dS))

[identity profile] sdwolfpup.livejournal.com 2006-11-20 04:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I loved this - cute and hot, and that last bit of dialogue was hilarious.

[identity profile] mickeymvt.livejournal.com 2006-11-20 07:22 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh jeez. *snicker* The dreaded falling office supplies.

[identity profile] mergatrude.livejournal.com 2006-11-20 10:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! What fun! I love the idea of Fraser being unable to resist temptation in the form of Ray.

[identity profile] custardpringle.livejournal.com 2006-11-21 11:46 am (UTC)(link)
Ray really does have a tendency to attract. Um. Staplers :D

[identity profile] marcellapolman.livejournal.com 2006-11-24 05:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Very funny! Great saving of the situation (you actually had me a little worried there). Very Fraser too.