Five challenge by china shop

[china_shop]

With many beta thanks to aerye for being tough and mergatrude for being picky. :-)

Fraser/Kowalski, 850 words, PG-rated

Five Times Fraser Said No

Comments

[vsee.livejournal.com]

I love this so much. This just works as a five things story so well, too, which makes it even more satisfying. I love the whole five things subgenre, and I love it when the story really FITS, and it isn't just a conceit.

Great buildup, delightful resolution. *loves more*

[china_shop]

Thank you so much! *beam*