china_shop: Thoughtful Fraser with his chin on his hands (Fraser (chin on hands))
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With many beta thanks to [livejournal.com profile] aerye for being tough and [livejournal.com profile] mergatrude for being picky. :-)

Fraser/Kowalski, 850 words, PG-rated

Five Times Fraser Said No
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Date: 2007-08-15 06:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hieronymousmosh.livejournal.com
Oh dear, I seem to be making a high pitched noise . . . This was the perfect way to end my day *g*

Date: 2007-08-15 06:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slidellra.livejournal.com
Oh, I love this! I love how the pieces sketch in a larger world we can imagine for them, and their relationship (camaraderie? ease-with-tension?) is deeply satisfying. Yay!

glancing at Fraser as his did so

Date: 2007-08-15 07:12 am (UTC)
ext_12745: (Default)
From: [identity profile] lamentables.livejournal.com
*sigh*

Lovely. I like the build-up/momentum as the parts get bigger.
(Hee, I mentioned parts getting bigger :)

Date: 2007-08-15 08:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] woolly-socks.livejournal.com
*snuggles into this story and settles in for the night*

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Date: 2007-08-15 08:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] chalcopyrite.livejournal.com
::happy sigh:: My morning just got more cheerful, thank you.

Date: 2007-08-15 08:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] laylee.livejournal.com
So sweet and beautiful.

*happy sigh*

Date: 2007-08-15 09:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] streetspirit18.livejournal.com
Oh, yeah. *big stupid grin*

Date: 2007-08-15 09:28 am (UTC)
eledhwenlin: (Default)
From: [personal profile] eledhwenlin
Awwwwwwwww. :D

Date: 2007-08-15 09:54 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buzzylittleb.livejournal.com
This is awesome and really cleverly constructed. The first few sound like random events, but when you get to the last one, you know they're not. *hugs the boys*

Date: 2007-08-15 10:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] vsee.livejournal.com
I love this so much. This just works as a five things story so well, too, which makes it even more satisfying. I love the whole five things subgenre, and I love it when the story really FITS, and it isn't just a conceit.

Great buildup, delightful resolution. *loves more*

Date: 2007-08-15 10:54 am (UTC)
sage: Still of Natasha Romanova from Iron Man 2 (floaty shirt 04 by scriggle)
From: [personal profile] sage
Absolutely gorgeous!! ♥ ♥ ♥

Date: 2007-08-15 11:02 am (UTC)
ext_12460: acquired from fanpop.com (Sweet by tx_tart)
From: [identity profile] akite.livejournal.com
My icon says it all. Except for when they were teasing Dief with the danish. That was just cruel. ;)

Date: 2007-08-15 11:37 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] qe2.livejournal.com
ohhhh.

mmmmm.

My day can start now.

Date: 2007-08-15 11:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rhiannon-jehane.livejournal.com
Oh, I love this!

Date: 2007-08-15 11:46 am (UTC)
ext_9263: (ds fraser mount me)
From: [identity profile] kristiinthedark.livejournal.com
awwww! That was so sweet and lovely. I worried, though! A little bit! ♥

Date: 2007-08-15 12:07 pm (UTC)
ext_14817: (Default)
From: [identity profile] meresy.livejournal.com
Eeeeeeeeeeeee! &hearts

*confettis you for writing dS again and smooshes Ray and Fraser*

Date: 2007-08-15 12:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] burntcopper.livejournal.com
I'm adding in with making bats fall from the sky.

d'aawwwwwwwww.

Date: 2007-08-15 12:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] etcetera-cat.livejournal.com
^_^ I love these little snapshot moments!

Date: 2007-08-15 12:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] buddleia.livejournal.com
Oh, Ray. Just lovely.

Date: 2007-08-15 01:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] purpig21.livejournal.com
I'm not normally a fan or these "5 things" snippets but these are perfection!

all linking together to make the big picture. So wonderfully sweet!

Date: 2007-08-15 01:46 pm (UTC)
ext_8892: (Ray & Fraser partners (silverakira))
From: [identity profile] beledibabe.livejournal.com
Oh, bless their hearts!

::Loves::

Date: 2007-08-15 01:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] viciouscats.livejournal.com
Awwww, this is so wonderful! :)

Date: 2007-08-15 02:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] perpet-fic.livejournal.com
Oh just lovely. It's a nice slow build. I'm especially fond of #3, because it give the idea that Ray's learned to translate Dief. Great stuff.

Date: 2007-08-15 03:09 pm (UTC)
ext_1611: Isis statue (Fraser b&w)
From: [identity profile] isiscolo.livejournal.com
Oh, I liked this a lot! And actually, #1 is the one that makes it all work for me, that sets it up so beautifully in a quick sketch with a few lines.

Date: 2007-08-15 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snarkyducky.livejournal.com
"You're delusional, furface. What danish?"
i should put this on a teeshirt and wear it! ;)

ran his hand through his hair, leaving it lopsided and ridiculous. Fraser's heart swelled.
oh hearts!

raised his hand to Fraser’s cheek, his thumb skating over Fraser’s jaw like a whisper.
this is a beautiful frame!

i love that Fraser doesn't let Ray do all the work, that he goes for it once he sees the signs ;D
thank you for sharing this lovely! ♥
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