Five challenge by china shop

[china_shop]

With many beta thanks to aerye for being tough and mergatrude for being picky. :-)

Fraser/Kowalski, 850 words, PG-rated

Five Times Fraser Said No

Comments

[hieronymousmosh.livejournal.com]

Oh dear, I seem to be making a high pitched noise . . . This was the perfect way to end my day *g*

[slidellra.livejournal.com]

Oh, I love this! I love how the pieces sketch in a larger world we can imagine for them, and their relationship (camaraderie? ease-with-tension?) is deeply satisfying. Yay!

glancing at Fraser as his did so

[lamentables.livejournal.com]

*sigh*

Lovely. I like the build-up/momentum as the parts get bigger.
(Hee, I mentioned parts getting bigger :)

[woolly-socks.livejournal.com]

*snuggles into this story and settles in for the night*

[chalcopyrite.livejournal.com]

::happy sigh:: My morning just got more cheerful, thank you.

[laylee.livejournal.com]

So sweet and beautiful.

*happy sigh*

[streetspirit18.livejournal.com]

Oh, yeah. *big stupid grin*

♥

[eledhwenlin]

Awwwwwwwww. :D

[buzzylittleb.livejournal.com]

This is awesome and really cleverly constructed. The first few sound like random events, but when you get to the last one, you know they're not. *hugs the boys*

[vsee.livejournal.com]

I love this so much. This just works as a five things story so well, too, which makes it even more satisfying. I love the whole five things subgenre, and I love it when the story really FITS, and it isn't just a conceit.

Great buildup, delightful resolution. *loves more*

[sage]

Absolutely gorgeous!! ♥ ♥ ♥

[akite.livejournal.com]

My icon says it all. Except for when they were teasing Dief with the danish. That was just cruel. ;)

[qe2.livejournal.com]

ohhhh.

mmmmm.

My day can start now.

[rhiannon-jehane.livejournal.com]

Oh, I love this!

[kristiinthedark.livejournal.com]

awwww! That was so sweet and lovely. I worried, though! A little bit! ♥

[meresy.livejournal.com]

Eeeeeeeeeeeee! &hearts

*confettis you for writing dS again and smooshes Ray and Fraser*

[burntcopper.livejournal.com]

I'm adding in with making bats fall from the sky.

d'aawwwwwwwww.

[etcetera-cat.livejournal.com]

^_^ I love these little snapshot moments!

[buddleia.livejournal.com]

Oh, Ray. Just lovely.

[purpig21.livejournal.com]

I'm not normally a fan or these "5 things" snippets but these are perfection!

all linking together to make the big picture. So wonderfully sweet!

[beledibabe.livejournal.com]

Oh, bless their hearts!

::Loves::

[viciouscats.livejournal.com]

Awwww, this is so wonderful! :)

[perpet-fic.livejournal.com]

Oh just lovely. It's a nice slow build. I'm especially fond of #3, because it give the idea that Ray's learned to translate Dief. Great stuff.

[isiscolo.livejournal.com]

Oh, I liked this a lot! And actually, #1 is the one that makes it all work for me, that sets it up so beautifully in a quick sketch with a few lines.

[snarkyducky.livejournal.com]

"You're delusional, furface. What danish?"
i should put this on a teeshirt and wear it! ;)

ran his hand through his hair, leaving it lopsided and ridiculous. Fraser's heart swelled.
oh hearts!

raised his hand to Fraser’s cheek, his thumb skating over Fraser’s jaw like a whisper.
this is a beautiful frame!

i love that Fraser doesn't let Ray do all the work, that he goes for it once he sees the signs ;D
thank you for sharing this lovely! ♥