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ds_flashfiction2007-09-04 10:50 am
slidellra.livejournal.com) wrote in ds_flashfiction2007-09-04 10:50 am
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Broken challenge by slidellra
Of the "somebody had to do it" variety. <100 words in which, um, seven or eight things are broken. F/K, PG. ![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
omphale23 looked at an earlier version of this for me.
A kiss, utterly unexpected, overwhelmingly soft and rough and real and now and...
"Shit, oh shit. Sorry--I didn't mean--I won't. I swear, Fraser."
Fraser's previous record from desk to office door was 2.3 seconds, and that time a child's life had been at stake.
The sound Ray made when Fraser caught him, and, happier, those he made later.
Fraser's left bootlace wouldn't give, wouldn't.
The vase blocked the window, and the window was Dief's exit.
The cot was on its last legs anyway. The desk chair was something of a surprise.
*
omphale23 looked at an earlier version of this for me. A kiss, utterly unexpected, overwhelmingly soft and rough and real and now and...
"Shit, oh shit. Sorry--I didn't mean--I won't. I swear, Fraser."
Fraser's previous record from desk to office door was 2.3 seconds, and that time a child's life had been at stake.
The sound Ray made when Fraser caught him, and, happier, those he made later.
Fraser's left bootlace wouldn't give, wouldn't.
The vase blocked the window, and the window was Dief's exit.
The cot was on its last legs anyway. The desk chair was something of a surprise.
*
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