Taggging along with everyone else in the 'fantastic,' 'excellent' praise department! Vivid images, perfect for the characters, and you make wonderful use of little bits of business: the pen clicks, Fraser trying not to straighten the edge of the paper, all that made this such a rich story.

My fav line?

Fraser treated Dief the way Ray's older brother David had treated Ray. But with less punching.

LOL!