ext_7027 ([identity profile] katallison.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction2003-06-22 03:47 pm

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This challenge *rocks.* One thing I've been enjoying in some of the stories ([livejournal.com profile] shellmidwife's and [livejournal.com profile] heuradys's, for example) is writers taking the opportunity to use some of their own specific professional knowledge in the documents they create. So this weekend, after several grueling days of getting new college students oriented and registed, and scribbling reams of file notes, I found this floating into my head. It's wayyyy over the word limit, so I'm posting it on my own webspace rather than in LJ, with apologies for inconvenience. Just a bit of silly fluff, but I had fun writing it.

[identity profile] brooklinegirl.livejournal.com 2003-06-23 09:32 am (UTC)(link)
This was so cool! I love this little peek into Ray's life. I'm with the others, I love the idea of him in a suit, with a haircut and a wedding band (and most probably a smirk). But I truly do love this little aside: Pretty young woman, looks a bit petulant. Ah, that's Stella to a T, methinks.