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Jeez, I'm barely running in the door here. I'm slipping this UNDER the door, actually. But this is my favorite of all the DS documents, and I kept waiting for one, and there wasn't, so here's mine. I'm linking direct to my page cause it's too much of a mess to upload to LJ. (Word to the wise--click through to the end.)
The story's called Self-Assessment.
The story's called Self-Assessment.
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I noticed you gave him CKR's birthday. Too bad we never got a real birthday for RayK (or anyone else for that matter).
I wonder how much it would raise his score if he could say his spouse was a Canadian citizen. *G* Maybe we need an emigration challenge.
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btw, "emigration challenge" sounds really good too.
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And the last line got me all choked-up. In the good way. (I'm such a sap.)
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Somewhere around here I still have the older copies of the immigration form that I downloaded and filled out when I was starting End of the Road. They didn't even *have* police officer on the occupations list at that point, so his score ended up being even lower. Glad to see that that's changed (but not as glad as Ray is, for sure).
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And I'm delighted you refused to countenance an unhappy ending. Yay, you!
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Two words: Canadian Shack.
Heh.
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Just... Guh!
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(shoot me now)
This was great, Ces. The perfect document and the perfect ending (hey...if even Kat's approving of the happy ending, there must *be* no alternative *g*). You be such a clever little girl!
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