Now I know I'm going to hell for real

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

ahem.

True Sacrifice, Chapter 3
By shessia n.

To everyone whose read this so far, thank u!!!!!! I heart you guys.

If u haven’t read the other parts, okay, so this is like my first story tho I sort of took the idea from another story I read, and it probably sucks, but don’t hate it to much, ok? And if u do hate it, u can keep that to yourself or I wont write any more. I don't use a beta.

Oh, yeah,
I LUV FRASER n RAYYYYY!!!!!

Chapter 3

“What do you mean I have to have sex with Fraser?” Ray said, pissed off. The first mob guy, Crenshaw, snickered and so did his men. He ponted his uzi at Ray.

“You and the mounty have been in my way for too long,” he said. “This is my revenge.”

“That’s stupid,” Ray said hotly and the guy nodded. Before he knew what hit him, a heavy gun smacked him in the back of his head. Seeing stars, Ray fell to his knees.

“You got a big mouth, Vecchio,” Crenshaw said, laughing at him. “You might as well use it on Fraser and maybe I’ll let you go.”

“This is crazy!” Ray started to say, but the guy behind him hit him again. Everything was starting to go gray around him.

“Crazy, maybe, Crenshaw said. “But I’ll be taping the whole thing, Vecchio. I’ve hated you for years. Maybe when I have the tape you and the Mounty will know better than to mess with me. Its your only hope that you’ll live thru this, Vecchio. But there’s just one thing. You can’t tell the mounty I’m making you do this or I’ll kill him. Understand me?”

“You piece of –“

A big fist closed on his spiky hair and pulled him up so hard tears sprang into his eyes.

“Take him away.”

Big hands grabbed him under his arms and dragged him down a hall, then tossed him into a small room. Ray rolled across the dirty floor and lay there, panting. Instantly Fraser’s muscular arms were encircling the blonde, stroking his face and pushing an errant lock of hair out of his eyes. Ray blinked and looked up at Fraser, and deep grays locked onto bright blues.

“Ray,” Fraser said, a look of worry and concern in his features. “Are you all right? Did they hurt you?”

“Just a little,” Ray admitted, wincing. Fraser helped him up to sit on the small cot, and ran inquisitive hands over his friend, to make sure Ray was still in one piece.

“What did they want?” Fraser asked.

“They wanted to…they wanted me to.” He stopped, looking at Fraser, who continued his careful ministrations. Maybe, Ray thought, maybe I can do this…

Comments

[imkalena.livejournal.com]

SNORGLE

Burn, baby, BURN!!

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

Trying my damndest! Thanks, luv!

[sihayab.livejournal.com]

U ROK!!!

DONT U JUST LUUUUUUUUUUUV FRASER'N'RAY... THEIR TWO CUTE AND IM GONNA MARRY BOTH OF THEM AFTER I GET MY PALOMINO HORSE FROM MY ICKY 'RENTS

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

thank u!
Cn I come over and visit your horse?

[sihayab.livejournal.com]

SURE! SHES GOING TO HAVE A LONG MAIN AND TAIL AND I'LL BRADE RIBBONS IN IT AND CALL HER PRINCESS MOONLITE...

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

::Lying down, legs having collapsed::

I think from now on, I shall have to call you "PRINCESS MOONLITE."

[sihayab.livejournal.com]

Didn't you know that's my anime name? ::g::

Seriuosly? Just try it, cupcake.

[brooklinegirl.livejournal.com]

Oh my lord! I bow down to you, woman. This is awesome. The story itself ("mounty," the bad grammar, spelling, punctuation) had me cracking up, but it was your introduction that brought tears to my eyes and had my entire office looking over to see what had me laughing so wildly. Bravo!

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

The sad thing is, I'm not exaggerating all that much. So happy you got a giggle from this.

[kev-bot.livejournal.com]

i Don't get why every1 sez this is a bad stroy! This is a GRATE sorty and u guyz dont know what your TAKING about!

I love Frazier and Benny! THERELOVEISSOOOOPURE!

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

See, when the comments are funnier than the stroy stoyr sotry fic, then I have to just bow in your general direction and say, thank you SOOOOOOOO MUCH I HEART U!!!!

[kev-bot.livejournal.com]

brooklinegirl thought Frazier and Benny was really funny. She hurt herself cackling. :-D

[chesamus.livejournal.com]

I heart you too, shessia. More! More!

Your friend in slash, chessie

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

"Shessie" was what I called myself when I was 5. Which I figure is the writing level for "shessia n." Right on, slash sistah.

[laurakaye.livejournal.com]

::cracks up::

So where's the "part 3 of ???" *G*

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

You are too right. Should go fix that but...nahhhhh.

So glad you liked this.

[thermidor.livejournal.com]

u don't need a beta, cuz you're story is so grate!

thanks for the giggles!

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

These comments are killing me. Thanks so much!

[ajinamoto.livejournal.com]

I am such an idiot. Or I'm having a helluva day/week/year. At first I was going... "huh? Part 3? Is Shay posting for this person, and why?"

Shoot me now.

It was very very funny, though, and a perfect example of what some writers write in their intros.

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

Fear not. I'm the one who didn't get Fraser being blind in mergatrude's wonderful story. And once I mistook Victoria for Ray in a fic. So no fear, mate. Glad you enjoyed it, whatever the hell it is.

[ajinamoto.livejournal.com]

once I mistook Victoria for Ray in a fic

That was mine!!! I feel so proud that you remembered. ::puffs up::

[marycrawford.livejournal.com]

Kewl!

r u sure u r new here? i think your story is grate.

Loff this: deep grays locked onto bright blues.
Sooooooo sweeeeeeet. And original 2.

Mary "Raven Starbrite" Crawford.

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

Loff this: deep grays locked onto bright blues.

That's one of my top three pet peeves. As I noted somewhere else, does "Ray's greens locked onto Fraser's deep blues" mean Vecchio's salad is hitting on Benton?

[akite.livejournal.com]

shessia, this story rocs! You so kewl. make more soon, ok?

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

I sense my alter ego is about to consume me entirely. Run, run away!
Thanks -

[the-star-fish.livejournal.com]

wow shessia that was so cool imean hot hahaha

(This is really hard. How'd you do it?)

can i link too this in my lj so all my frendz can read it to?

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

Shure! The moar the merrier! Link away!
(It is, actually, hard to write this stuff, I am thrilled to say.)

[jenboo.livejournal.com]

*giggle* *snort* *guffaw* *thunk* Ouch.

*drags self off of floor and back into chair*

Hard to type when laughing so hard.

You are so going to hell. I'll save you a seat next to me. :o) *mwah!*

[jenboo.livejournal.com]

and the comments are killing me, too!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

I keep waiting for any of a number of people to write and say I stole their style.
Glad I made you laugh. Save me a hot seat.

[cesperanza.livejournal.com]

Great story! Write more!

(heh)

-Cessie!

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

What? No summary?"Great story! I love it when Ray gets hit and has to have sex with Fraser or the bad guys will kill them, so he goes..."

::On way to hell, not passing GO, not collecting...::

[lamardeuse.livejournal.com]

Oh my lord. I remember there was a great XF Badfic site--do you think we could start one for DS? That would be HILARIOUS...just like this fabulous bit of business!

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

::jumping in ill-disguised joy::
Ho, yeah, that would be something, all right. Of course, there are whole sections of Exwood that could go in as is.
Thanks for the cheer!

[mergatrude.livejournal.com]

now, see, I had a Stupid Moment, so we're even. When I first discovered fanfic it was (I blush to admit) Charmed and Buffy and so much of it was just like this! But to do it on purpose ... m bows in your general direction.

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

s curtseys in return, thank you kindly.

[viciouscats.livejournal.com]

Heee! Hilarious! Your "badfic" is always a pleasure. :)


Btw, I'm currently working on a master list of "fuck-or-die" fic and am a bit confused about the "official" title of this story. Is it untitled? Or is the title something like "True Sacrifice, Chapter 3 (By shessia n.)"?

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

Wow, talk about something I haven't seen in YEARS!

I guess if you're putting out a master list of bad!fic (0.o) you might as well give it the whole long title, "True Sacrifice, Chapter 3 (By shessia n.)" - I think this mythical "shessia" should be included in the ghastly title.

(This amused me greatly, to find your comment FIVE YEARS after it was posted! Can it truly be that long???)

[viciouscats.livejournal.com]

Glad I could amuse you! :) I'm pretty sure that even nowadays quite a lot of people (especially newbies) actually read all these old ds_flashfiction entries, they are just slacking on commenting. *g*

And yes, I'm gonna include this fic on the list. It started out as a genuine "serious" fuck-or-die fic list but now it turns out 2/3 crackfic, so I figure "badfic" won't hurt it much. Plus, I love your "badfic", more people should enjoy it. ;)

[ride-4ever.livejournal.com]

...and then there are the newbies (like me) who read all the old ds_flashfiction entries and DO comment. Like, what MAKES "badfic" considered "bad". I really liked this flash here and wish there WERE a chapter 4.

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

I'm deeply touched by your comment, and delighted to hear, 7 years after the fact, that you got a kick out of this. Sadly, there is no chapter 4, at least until and unless I lose my mind again.

[vickitub.livejournal.com]

Wow where i can read part 1 and 2 and is there more

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

Heehee, thanks. Nope, that was all I wrote. But now that people want more...hmmmm.....
(Thanks for the cheer!)