Now I know I'm going to hell for real
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True Sacrifice, Chapter 3
By shessia n.
To everyone whose read this so far, thank u!!!!!! I heart you guys.
If u haven’t read the other parts, okay, so this is like my first story tho I sort of took the idea from another story I read, and it probably sucks, but don’t hate it to much, ok? And if u do hate it, u can keep that to yourself or I wont write any more. I don't use a beta.
Oh, yeah,
I LUV FRASER n RAYYYYY!!!!!
Chapter 3
“What do you mean I have to have sex with Fraser?” Ray said, pissed off. The first mob guy, Crenshaw, snickered and so did his men. He ponted his uzi at Ray.
“You and the mounty have been in my way for too long,” he said. “This is my revenge.”
“That’s stupid,” Ray said hotly and the guy nodded. Before he knew what hit him, a heavy gun smacked him in the back of his head. Seeing stars, Ray fell to his knees.
“You got a big mouth, Vecchio,” Crenshaw said, laughing at him. “You might as well use it on Fraser and maybe I’ll let you go.”
“This is crazy!” Ray started to say, but the guy behind him hit him again. Everything was starting to go gray around him.
“Crazy, maybe, Crenshaw said. “But I’ll be taping the whole thing, Vecchio. I’ve hated you for years. Maybe when I have the tape you and the Mounty will know better than to mess with me. Its your only hope that you’ll live thru this, Vecchio. But there’s just one thing. You can’t tell the mounty I’m making you do this or I’ll kill him. Understand me?”
“You piece of –“
A big fist closed on his spiky hair and pulled him up so hard tears sprang into his eyes.
“Take him away.”
Big hands grabbed him under his arms and dragged him down a hall, then tossed him into a small room. Ray rolled across the dirty floor and lay there, panting. Instantly Fraser’s muscular arms were encircling the blonde, stroking his face and pushing an errant lock of hair out of his eyes. Ray blinked and looked up at Fraser, and deep grays locked onto bright blues.
“Ray,” Fraser said, a look of worry and concern in his features. “Are you all right? Did they hurt you?”
“Just a little,” Ray admitted, wincing. Fraser helped him up to sit on the small cot, and ran inquisitive hands over his friend, to make sure Ray was still in one piece.
“What did they want?” Fraser asked.
“They wanted to…they wanted me to.” He stopped, looking at Fraser, who continued his careful ministrations. Maybe, Ray thought, maybe I can do this…
True Sacrifice, Chapter 3
By shessia n.
To everyone whose read this so far, thank u!!!!!! I heart you guys.
If u haven’t read the other parts, okay, so this is like my first story tho I sort of took the idea from another story I read, and it probably sucks, but don’t hate it to much, ok? And if u do hate it, u can keep that to yourself or I wont write any more. I don't use a beta.
Oh, yeah,
I LUV FRASER n RAYYYYY!!!!!
Chapter 3
“What do you mean I have to have sex with Fraser?” Ray said, pissed off. The first mob guy, Crenshaw, snickered and so did his men. He ponted his uzi at Ray.
“You and the mounty have been in my way for too long,” he said. “This is my revenge.”
“That’s stupid,” Ray said hotly and the guy nodded. Before he knew what hit him, a heavy gun smacked him in the back of his head. Seeing stars, Ray fell to his knees.
“You got a big mouth, Vecchio,” Crenshaw said, laughing at him. “You might as well use it on Fraser and maybe I’ll let you go.”
“This is crazy!” Ray started to say, but the guy behind him hit him again. Everything was starting to go gray around him.
“Crazy, maybe, Crenshaw said. “But I’ll be taping the whole thing, Vecchio. I’ve hated you for years. Maybe when I have the tape you and the Mounty will know better than to mess with me. Its your only hope that you’ll live thru this, Vecchio. But there’s just one thing. You can’t tell the mounty I’m making you do this or I’ll kill him. Understand me?”
“You piece of –“
A big fist closed on his spiky hair and pulled him up so hard tears sprang into his eyes.
“Take him away.”
Big hands grabbed him under his arms and dragged him down a hall, then tossed him into a small room. Ray rolled across the dirty floor and lay there, panting. Instantly Fraser’s muscular arms were encircling the blonde, stroking his face and pushing an errant lock of hair out of his eyes. Ray blinked and looked up at Fraser, and deep grays locked onto bright blues.
“Ray,” Fraser said, a look of worry and concern in his features. “Are you all right? Did they hurt you?”
“Just a little,” Ray admitted, wincing. Fraser helped him up to sit on the small cot, and ran inquisitive hands over his friend, to make sure Ray was still in one piece.
“What did they want?” Fraser asked.
“They wanted to…they wanted me to.” He stopped, looking at Fraser, who continued his careful ministrations. Maybe, Ray thought, maybe I can do this…
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Date: 2003-07-30 06:57 pm (UTC)Burn, baby, BURN!!
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Date: 2003-07-30 07:56 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-07-30 07:01 pm (UTC)DONT U JUST LUUUUUUUUUUUV FRASER'N'RAY... THEIR TWO CUTE AND IM GONNA MARRY BOTH OF THEM AFTER I GET MY PALOMINO HORSE FROM MY ICKY 'RENTS
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Date: 2003-07-30 07:59 pm (UTC)Cn I come over and visit your horse?
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Date: 2003-07-30 08:23 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-07-30 09:46 pm (UTC)I think from now on, I shall have to call you "PRINCESS MOONLITE."
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Date: 2003-07-31 02:47 am (UTC)Seriuosly? Just try it, cupcake.
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Date: 2003-07-30 07:03 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-07-30 07:59 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-07-30 07:12 pm (UTC)I love Frazier and Benny! THERELOVEISSOOOOPURE!
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Date: 2003-07-30 07:52 pm (UTC)stroy stoyr sotryfic, then I have to just bow in your general direction and say, thank you SOOOOOOOO MUCH I HEART U!!!!no subject
Date: 2003-07-30 08:50 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-07-30 07:12 pm (UTC)Your friend in slash, chessie
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Date: 2003-07-30 07:55 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-07-30 07:26 pm (UTC)So where's the "part 3 of ???" *G*
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Date: 2003-07-30 07:53 pm (UTC)So glad you liked this.
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Date: 2003-07-30 07:28 pm (UTC)thanks for the giggles!
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Date: 2003-07-30 07:53 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-07-30 08:07 pm (UTC)Shoot me now.
It was very very funny, though, and a perfect example of what some writers write in their intros.
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Date: 2003-07-30 08:12 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-07-30 08:23 pm (UTC)That was mine!!! I feel so proud that you remembered. ::puffs up::
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Date: 2003-07-30 08:09 pm (UTC)r u sure u r new here? i think your story is grate.
Loff this: deep grays locked onto bright blues.
Sooooooo sweeeeeeet. And original 2.
Mary "Raven Starbrite" Crawford.
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Date: 2003-07-30 08:14 pm (UTC)That's one of my top three pet peeves. As I noted somewhere else, does "Ray's greens locked onto Fraser's deep blues" mean Vecchio's salad is hitting on Benton?
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Date: 2003-07-30 08:23 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-07-30 08:42 pm (UTC)Thanks -
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Date: 2003-07-30 08:26 pm (UTC)(This is really hard. How'd you do it?)
can i link too this in my lj so all my frendz can read it to?
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Date: 2003-07-30 08:41 pm (UTC)(It is, actually, hard to write this stuff, I am thrilled to say.)
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Date: 2003-07-30 08:36 pm (UTC)*drags self off of floor and back into chair*
Hard to type when laughing so hard.
You are so going to hell. I'll save you a seat next to me. :o) *mwah!*
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Date: 2003-07-30 08:37 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-07-30 08:38 pm (UTC)Glad I made you laugh. Save me a hot seat.
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Date: 2003-07-30 09:21 pm (UTC)(heh)
-Cessie!
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Date: 2003-07-30 09:52 pm (UTC)::On way to hell, not passing GO, not collecting...::
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Date: 2003-07-31 12:30 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-07-31 01:23 am (UTC)Ho, yeah, that would be something, all right. Of course, there are whole sections of Exwood that could go in as is.
Thanks for the cheer!
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Date: 2003-07-31 02:02 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2003-07-31 03:02 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2008-02-22 01:29 pm (UTC)Btw, I'm currently working on a master list of "fuck-or-die" fic and am a bit confused about the "official" title of this story. Is it untitled? Or is the title something like "True Sacrifice, Chapter 3 (By shessia n.)"?
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Date: 2008-02-22 08:23 pm (UTC)I guess if you're putting out a master list of bad!fic (0.o) you might as well give it the whole long title, "True Sacrifice, Chapter 3 (By shessia n.)" - I think this mythical "shessia" should be included in the ghastly title.
(This amused me greatly, to find your comment FIVE YEARS after it was posted! Can it truly be that long???)
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Date: 2008-02-22 09:10 pm (UTC)And yes, I'm gonna include this fic on the list. It started out as a genuine "serious" fuck-or-die fic list but now it turns out 2/3 crackfic, so I figure "badfic" won't hurt it much. Plus, I love your "badfic", more people should enjoy it. ;)
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Date: 2011-08-17 12:37 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2011-08-20 02:45 am (UTC)(Thanks for the cheer!)