ext_3545: Jon Walker, being adorable! (Dief by Heuradys)
Dira Sudis ([identity profile] dsudis.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction2003-09-26 06:36 am

Movie challenge

Home movies are movies, right? And Ray only has the one home movie that matters, but even Dief got sick of watching it after a year or so. I told him he could have a hundred words, and this is what he said:



I discovered my favorite thing about the kid when we were packing videotapes, and I realized David had never seen my homer. Turned out he'd never seen baseball, period. I went through the whole inning, play by play, til he was as excited as me when I hit that ball.

I looked up and Fraser was watching us, and that's when I knew why I put up with all the lost sleep and screaming.

Because that's my favorite thing about the kid: the way Ben smiled, and shook his head, and sat down to tell him how it really happened.

[identity profile] fkfan.livejournal.com 2011-02-18 12:35 am (UTC)(link)
OMG, have just reread this for the umpteenth time and I wish you would write more. I love this story. Fraser needs to get over his reticence and David needs to relax. I'd love to see that happen where hugs were given by all at any time.

Brenda