china_shop: Thoughtful Fraser with his chin on his hands (Fraser (chin on hands))
The Gauche in the Machine ([personal profile] china_shop) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction2007-08-15 05:20 pm

Five challenge by china shop

With many beta thanks to [livejournal.com profile] aerye for being tough and [livejournal.com profile] mergatrude for being picky. :-)

Fraser/Kowalski, 850 words, PG-rated

Five Times Fraser Said No

[identity profile] counterfeitcoin.livejournal.com 2007-08-16 06:28 am (UTC)(link)
I love the build up of their relationship through four (okay, maybe three-and-a-half) seemingly unimportant events, or at least events that don't have much significance until the fifth one makes it clear. Very nice.