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ds_flashfiction2008-12-03 12:34 pm
arrow00.livejournal.com) wrote in ds_flashfiction2008-12-03 12:34 pm
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Bad Sex Challenge by Arrow (NC-17)
Title: Perfect
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arrow00
Pairing: Fraser/RayK
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 414
Categories: FT, PWP
Perfect
By Arrow
This is—seriously—the worst blow job Ray has ever had in his life.
For one thing, there's way too much licking going on. Sure, he'd always imagined that if Fraser ever got with the program and jumped him there would be a lot of licking involved, but not like this. Fraser's tongue is teasing the hell out of Ray's dick—not enough pressure, or too much in the wrong spots—and the worst part is, Ray knows he isn't doing it on purpose.
Ray finds himself wanting to shake him and say, Jesus, Fraser, haven't you ever gotten a blow job before? And it makes Ray want to blow him right this second to show him how it's done. Because with the constant licking and never in the right place, sometimes in the wrong place, touching his slit and almost making Ray get that gotta pee feeling, it's pretty obvious that, yeah, Fraser has never been on the receiving end. Which is the saddest fucking thing in the world, as far as Ray is concerned.
Now Fraser's got a pretty good rhythm going with his hand, but when he starts trying to suck, he's sloppy and a little dangerous with the teeth, making Ray wince. Jesus, Stella could give him a better blow job in her sleep; which, with the way their marriage was going those last couple of years, was almost Ray's reality at times.
But Fraser isn't Stella, not by a long shot. And just having Fraser blow him is a hot fucking thought all on its own. So, Ray looks down to see Fraser's mouth on him, thinking that will help push him over, because he's still riding that impossible edge that makes him want to kill someone—Ray's going to go nuts if he doesn't get off soon. And when he looks down he sees Fraser's eyes staring up at him.
Not with Stella's look. Not with the look of anyone who's ever touched him. Fraser's eyes are desperate, wanting so badly to please him, wanting Ray so hard—he's so goddamned anxious to get it right that he's getting it all wrong.
Fraser lifts his mouth for a second and says, "Ray," in this hoarse, pleading voice, and Ray looks at his swollen, red lips and stares into his concerned eyes and comes so hard he ends up whining.
Later, as he's licking all the come off the underside of Fraser's chin, when Fraser asks, "Was it...was I all right, Ray?"
Ray says, "Yeah. You're perfect."
And he means it.
......................
2008.12.03
ETA: er, there's now a comment sequel. Blameqe2.
A/N: I imagine later Ray gives Fraser some serious pointers while reciprocating. I am a firm believer in honesty between lovers, and full disclosure when it comes to what makes it good. But I had to take a little artistic license.
Author:
arrow00Pairing: Fraser/RayK
Rating: NC-17
Wordcount: 414
Categories: FT, PWP
Perfect
By Arrow
This is—seriously—the worst blow job Ray has ever had in his life.
For one thing, there's way too much licking going on. Sure, he'd always imagined that if Fraser ever got with the program and jumped him there would be a lot of licking involved, but not like this. Fraser's tongue is teasing the hell out of Ray's dick—not enough pressure, or too much in the wrong spots—and the worst part is, Ray knows he isn't doing it on purpose.
Ray finds himself wanting to shake him and say, Jesus, Fraser, haven't you ever gotten a blow job before? And it makes Ray want to blow him right this second to show him how it's done. Because with the constant licking and never in the right place, sometimes in the wrong place, touching his slit and almost making Ray get that gotta pee feeling, it's pretty obvious that, yeah, Fraser has never been on the receiving end. Which is the saddest fucking thing in the world, as far as Ray is concerned.
Now Fraser's got a pretty good rhythm going with his hand, but when he starts trying to suck, he's sloppy and a little dangerous with the teeth, making Ray wince. Jesus, Stella could give him a better blow job in her sleep; which, with the way their marriage was going those last couple of years, was almost Ray's reality at times.
But Fraser isn't Stella, not by a long shot. And just having Fraser blow him is a hot fucking thought all on its own. So, Ray looks down to see Fraser's mouth on him, thinking that will help push him over, because he's still riding that impossible edge that makes him want to kill someone—Ray's going to go nuts if he doesn't get off soon. And when he looks down he sees Fraser's eyes staring up at him.
Not with Stella's look. Not with the look of anyone who's ever touched him. Fraser's eyes are desperate, wanting so badly to please him, wanting Ray so hard—he's so goddamned anxious to get it right that he's getting it all wrong.
Fraser lifts his mouth for a second and says, "Ray," in this hoarse, pleading voice, and Ray looks at his swollen, red lips and stares into his concerned eyes and comes so hard he ends up whining.
Later, as he's licking all the come off the underside of Fraser's chin, when Fraser asks, "Was it...was I all right, Ray?"
Ray says, "Yeah. You're perfect."
And he means it.
......................
2008.12.03
ETA: er, there's now a comment sequel. Blame
qe2.A/N: I imagine later Ray gives Fraser some serious pointers while reciprocating. I am a firm believer in honesty between lovers, and full disclosure when it comes to what makes it good. But I had to take a little artistic license.
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