ext_2386 ([identity profile] teaphile.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ds_flashfiction2008-05-27 02:07 pm

GotR Challenge, by Teaphile

Title: On the seizing of a low moment.
Category: Gen.
Rating: G.
Length: 100 words
Summary: Dief should be ashamed of himself.



"You ought to be ashamed of yourself, trying to take advantage of me when I'm in this state," Ray said, slipping one hand under the table to give Dief's nose a scratch.

The wolf groaned in pleasure, settling his muzzle deeper into Ray's knee. After a moment of contentment, Dief nosed at the corner of the paper wrapper that hung off the side of the table.

"Yeah, yeah." Ray picked the whole wrapper up, sandwich and all, and dropped it to the floor, where Dief snapped it up in two quick bites. "At least one of us should be happy."
akamine_chan: Created by me; please don't take (Default)

[personal profile] akamine_chan 2008-05-27 04:15 am (UTC)(link)
Hee. Dief is such a manipulator!

[identity profile] cysefin.livejournal.com 2008-05-27 04:44 am (UTC)(link)
On first look it's almost humorous. The it's kinda angsty because why is Ray so sad? Maybe it's a death!fic? Am I supposed to feel bad for the sandwich?

A hundred words is worth a thousand theories... ty for sharing...lol

[identity profile] cysefin.livejournal.com 2008-05-27 05:13 pm (UTC)(link)
The mystery is SOLVED! I knew the sandwich had something to do with it.

[identity profile] love-jackianto.livejournal.com 2008-05-27 04:44 am (UTC)(link)
Awwwe... that was so cute.

[identity profile] kuwdora.livejournal.com 2008-05-27 08:47 am (UTC)(link)
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Adorable.
china_shop: Close-up of Zhao Yunlan grinning (RayK dark hot serious)

[personal profile] china_shop 2008-05-27 10:19 am (UTC)(link)
Awww! *pets Ray* It'll all turn out all right, won't it? (This is great! Yay!)
ext_12460: acquired from fanpop.com (Dief kisses by scriggle)

[identity profile] akite.livejournal.com 2008-05-27 10:57 am (UTC)(link)
I'm with everyone else, why is Ray in a state? Bad, Dief! *g*
ext_9063: (due South Stanley)

[identity profile] mlyn.livejournal.com 2008-05-27 02:56 pm (UTC)(link)
HEE. Ray's such a softie. V. cute.

[identity profile] brigantine.livejournal.com 2008-05-27 03:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Just because Fraser's stuck at the consulate instead of home kissing Ray, should the wolf have to suffer too? I think not. Sensible Dief. ;D

[identity profile] thady.livejournal.com 2008-05-27 07:27 pm (UTC)(link)
He, this is cute. Go Dief! *g*

[identity profile] kill-claudio.livejournal.com 2008-05-27 09:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Heh, that's so typical of Dief! And I have every faith that he'll help the idiotic humans straighen out whatever mess they've gotten themselves into this time...as soon as he's eaten the sandwich. At least Dief has his priorities straight. *pets him*
ext_975: photo of a woof (Due South)

[identity profile] springwoof.livejournal.com 2008-05-28 10:57 am (UTC)(link)
But now I want to know about the "low moment" Dief exploited...
ext_975: photo of a woof (Due South)

[identity profile] springwoof.livejournal.com 2008-05-29 10:52 am (UTC)(link)
bwahahaha!
ext_3554: dream wolf (Default)

[identity profile] keerawa.livejournal.com 2008-05-31 06:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Typical! But I notice that Dief is there from the start, muzzle on Ray's knee, and petting a dog (or wolf!) in a low moment really does help.