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That was marvelous. Loved Vecchio still managing to be macho and full of attitude in silky lace panties, and the voices were perfect. I thought your descriptive language was particularly well done; you painted such a clear picture of even the most minute detail that I felt like I was right there in the room with them. Lovely gritty, visceral atmosphere to this. Nicely done. (Even if it was Ray/Ray. Curse all these skilled DS writers who manage to convince me that hey, yeah, I could see that...)