I had to read this about 4 times to figure out what was going on.
Which goes to prove that this story does NOT suck, at least not by my definition of a story sucking. Because, when a story sucks, I can't be bothered to sit through more than a reading.
What you presented was an intriguing, bitter sweet vision of a far off future, written wisely and knowledgeably.
For what it's worth, I think it was brilliant, as well as lovely.
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Date: 2003-09-21 10:04 pm (UTC)Which goes to prove that this story does NOT suck, at least not by my definition of a story sucking. Because, when a story sucks, I can't be bothered to sit through more than a reading.
What you presented was an intriguing, bitter sweet vision of a far off future, written wisely and knowledgeably.
For what it's worth, I think it was brilliant, as well as lovely.