Lovely! (Well, except for the part about Spock, where I snorted my coffee and had to do some serious sinus care.) Heh.
You nailed the voices, and the concept is perfect for these two. Love the ending, especially the bit where they return to Ray's apartment and engage in some serious camel fucking.
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Date: 2003-11-11 01:15 pm (UTC)You nailed the voices, and the concept is perfect for these two. Love the ending, especially the bit where they return to Ray's apartment and engage in some serious camel fucking.
Oh. Wait. You haven't written that yet!
::tapping foot impatiently::
Well?