This is utterly charming. I can go for cliche setups if this is what happens!
Love the Ray voice, and Ben is way sexy when seen through Ray's eyes. The setting seemed very real and I like the grounding details you used, like the stinky sleeping bag, Ray's ratty gray boxers, the sexual details, and the awkwardness of maneuvering in such a small space.
I'd join the Church of Ben if I could roll around with him too. ;)
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Date: 2004-06-29 06:05 am (UTC)Love the Ray voice, and Ben is way sexy when seen through Ray's eyes. The setting seemed very real and I like the grounding details you used, like the stinky sleeping bag, Ray's ratty gray boxers, the sexual details, and the awkwardness of maneuvering in such a small space.
I'd join the Church of Ben if I could roll around with him too. ;)