Date: 2004-01-03 07:33 pm (UTC)
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I've said it before and I will say it again: loved this to pieces. But then, I say that for all your work, so I suppose I'm starting to sound like a broken record. :)

“That as good as it gets, Frase?” He doesn’t move his hand, leaves it there on my shoulder, a challenge.

Loved the oh-so-sexy give and take of this, like when they trade off being brave at the crucial moment:

Before he can say another word, I lean forward and kiss him again. Fierce. Sure. Like him.

I absolutely adore your sex scenes, because what makes them so hot is not simply the physical descriptions, which, admittedly, are fabulous, but also the *emotion* you convey--the need, the desperation, the love. What goes on in the brain is easily as sexy as what goes on between the sheets--or on the couch--and you understand that perfectly.
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