Wow. That was wonderful. I really liked how you used little pieces and thoughts and feelings Fraser had in the pilot and worked them in to why he went in the first place. I especially love the final paragraphs were he actually talked to Quinn, Eric, and Frobisher about going. Nice touch. But I think it's the final line that gets me.
I am finally able to do something for my father out of love.
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Date: 2004-01-25 04:13 pm (UTC)I am finally able to do something for my father out of love.
Wonderful.