Sigh. I'd love to pull out every bit of dialogue I loved in this and tell you exactly why, but we'd be here all damn day as I grabbed each and every section.
You write the most amazing Ray/Fraser dialogue. Every single thing you write, I can quite easliy see as being part of the actual show, this one especially. Really excellent *g*
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Date: 2004-03-17 06:30 am (UTC)You write the most amazing Ray/Fraser dialogue. Every single thing you write, I can quite easliy see as being part of the actual show, this one especially. Really excellent *g*
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