I love it! (But you knew that already ....) The sense of motion in the beginning part, with Fraser following Ray through the station (I keep thinking of the camera angles in Mountie and Soul); Fraser taking deep breaths to try to control his annoyance; Ray blithely shooting off that it makes sense to *him* while Fraser grinds his teeth - all wonderful. That "like the wind" comment never fails to make me grin, and the last two paragraphs - just, wow.
Great, great job - and I'm looking forward to the smut *g*
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Date: 2004-03-17 09:51 am (UTC)Great, great job - and I'm looking forward to the smut *g*