Dear lord. I'm sort of just sitting here in stunned amazement. I'll have you know, I read this twice. In a row. Immediately. Because it's just the hottest, most desperate, most real thing. I - okay, guh.
:deep breath:
Let's try to be coherant, shall we? Okay. All right. Man. This is - this works for me on a number of levels. You made this work. The aspect, with knowing this is nothing more than bathroom sex? That Vecchio is of course going to get Stella back, and Kowalski helps him? It's just - it's not an AU! It's how something like this would happen. It's wonderful.
The whole set-up was *fabulous*, the snark was *dead on*, but it was here:
They stared at each other for a long moment, eye-to-eye, Ray-to-fucking-Ray.
That you had me HOOKED. Guh.
I loved this description a whole hell of a lot:
a grin that made him look ten years younger, gone as soon as it appeared.
because I know JUST the grin you're talking about.
Ray hooked his fingers over the top of Kowalski’s jeans and pulled him forward suddenly. He was a graceful little bastard though, and stepped forward in one smooth move, trapping Ray’s hand between them. Ray shifted his stance a little wider and bucked forward. Jesus, this isn’t happening.
:whimpers happily: Oh god, yes, it is, and it's fucking HOT. Dear GOD, I love this mental image so freaking much. And god, this:
Ray leaned back against the bathroom wall and bit his lip. He was starting to sweat. He could feel his mouth watering and his knees went soft. Oh God, Ray wanted to suck him off. Shit, he had already given this guy everything, everything, and now this too…
I just love the MOTIVATION here. I just love this NEED, not even desire, just sheer, animal NEED here, that Vecchio gonna get on his knees whether he wants to or not. Only god, GOD, I love that Kowalski goes for it first. And here:
It didn’t matter, because as soon as he brought his hot mouth back to Ray’s cock, Ray forgot everything except biting his lip and coming, shaking, moaning, until he was spent and gasping against the cold tile wall.
::fans self and looks around to make sure no one notices her panting::
They are so. Damn. Hot together. Seriously. I'm in HEAVEN here.
I love you! So much! Thank you for this - it is JUST what I wanted. Perfection. Loveliness. I know you suffered like hell to write this and I (and, um, I'm sure Ray and Ray) appreciate it a whole lot. A whole whole lot. Yes. ::nodsnods::
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Date: 2004-05-10 12:00 pm (UTC):fails::
Dear lord. I'm sort of just sitting here in stunned amazement. I'll have you know, I read this twice. In a row. Immediately. Because it's just the hottest, most desperate, most real thing. I - okay, guh.
:deep breath:
Let's try to be coherant, shall we? Okay. All right. Man. This is - this works for me on a number of levels. You made this work. The aspect, with knowing this is nothing more than bathroom sex? That Vecchio is of course going to get Stella back, and Kowalski helps him? It's just - it's not an AU! It's how something like this would happen. It's wonderful.
The whole set-up was *fabulous*, the snark was *dead on*, but it was here:
They stared at each other for a long moment, eye-to-eye, Ray-to-fucking-Ray.
That you had me HOOKED. Guh.
I loved this description a whole hell of a lot:
a grin that made him look ten years younger, gone as soon as it appeared.
because I know JUST the grin you're talking about.
Ray hooked his fingers over the top of Kowalski’s jeans and pulled him forward suddenly. He was a graceful little bastard though, and stepped forward in one smooth move, trapping Ray’s hand between them. Ray shifted his stance a little wider and bucked forward. Jesus, this isn’t happening.
:whimpers happily: Oh god, yes, it is, and it's fucking HOT. Dear GOD, I love this mental image so freaking much. And god, this:
Ray leaned back against the bathroom wall and bit his lip. He was starting to sweat. He could feel his mouth watering and his knees went soft. Oh God, Ray wanted to suck him off. Shit, he had already given this guy everything, everything, and now this too…
I just love the MOTIVATION here. I just love this NEED, not even desire, just sheer, animal NEED here, that Vecchio gonna get on his knees whether he wants to or not. Only god, GOD, I love that Kowalski goes for it first. And here:
It didn’t matter, because as soon as he brought his hot mouth back to Ray’s cock, Ray forgot everything except biting his lip and coming, shaking, moaning, until he was spent and gasping against the cold tile wall.
::fans self and looks around to make sure no one notices her panting::
They are so. Damn. Hot together. Seriously. I'm in HEAVEN here.
I love you! So much! Thank you for this - it is JUST what I wanted. Perfection. Loveliness. I know you suffered like hell to write this and I (and, um, I'm sure Ray and Ray) appreciate it a whole lot. A whole whole lot. Yes. ::nodsnods::
::Tries to be strong::
::Fails::
::Goes to re-read::