Pretty

Date: 2004-08-09 06:13 pm (UTC)
*licks*
perfectly executed. Just with detail, you've set the tone, the mood, and a cadence that takes you right there. I can literally hear the roar of strain as they hold it all in and then that crack at the end is like ice snapping. But with warmth.
Thank you! for posting. Made my day.
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