Really fantastic piece, Nifra. Ray's so lonely it hurts and you've conveyed that beautifully. I love that the destruction feels more satisfying to him than the orgasm...my theory is that it's because he's expressing real emotion, not just going through the motions. That he hasn't gotten true release from an orgasm in a long time.
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Date: 2004-09-27 08:03 am (UTC)Really fantastic piece, Nifra. Ray's so lonely it hurts and you've conveyed that beautifully.
I love that the destruction feels more satisfying to him than the orgasm...my theory is that it's because he's expressing real emotion, not just going through the motions. That he hasn't gotten true release from an orgasm in a long time.
*pets Ray*
Wonderful job!!!