Date: 2004-09-28 11:07 am (UTC)
I completely love what you added! I think it made Fraser's struggle more tenuous and real, and the end--oh, the end is marvelous, with that kind of quiet repetition of someone who has to whisper encouragement to himself, just to get through, because there's no one else to say it.

*waves pom-poms like mad*
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