Dude - killing me freaking dead over here lately, ok?
Most importantly, she got his attitude: she went into that marriage a shy debutante from the Gold Coast and came out of it prepared to go toe-to-toe with anybody. She had Ray to thank for that, which was another reason she still wore his name.
LOVE this. I love thinking that even now Stella realizes, and appreciates what Ray had given her. Wonderful job.
For me, the hottest thing ever was the thought of Stella watching Ray and the jock making out, and then Ray taking Stella back to the car and fucking her in the backseat. This line in particular, really struck me as something a 17 year old Stella would say:
Finally, she hears herself saying, "But he's a jock," like that's the important point; how could Ray Kowalski even be seen with a jock? Not, she supposed, that Ray ever intended to be seen.
Wow. Just, the whole damn thing was incredible. Terrific job!
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Date: 2004-10-04 08:14 am (UTC)Most importantly, she got his attitude: she went into that marriage a shy debutante from the Gold Coast and came out of it prepared to go toe-to-toe with anybody. She had Ray to thank for that, which was another reason she still wore his name.
LOVE this. I love thinking that even now Stella realizes, and appreciates what Ray had given her. Wonderful job.
For me, the hottest thing ever was the thought of Stella watching Ray and the jock making out, and then Ray taking Stella back to the car and fucking her in the backseat. This line in particular, really struck me as something a 17 year old Stella would say:
Finally, she hears herself saying, "But he's a jock," like that's the important point; how could Ray Kowalski even be seen with a jock? Not, she supposed, that Ray ever intended to be seen.
Wow. Just, the whole damn thing was incredible. Terrific job!