Wow. This was amazing. I really liked how you got the humour and the frustration and the desperate sadness to seem so at ease inside such a small story. Interesting echoes of the problems RayK and Fraser might face in some future relationship, too. And I liked this:
just yesterday the shape of his lips as he pronounced the word "cauliflower" had driven her close to blind rage.
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Date: 2004-11-16 01:11 pm (UTC)just yesterday the shape of his lips as he pronounced the word "cauliflower" had driven her close to blind rage.
because yes, yes, I have been exactly there. :)