Let Me See, by Rae

[rjm-257.livejournal.com]

I didn't mean to, didn't mean to, I swear!

For me, it was mostly visual, though there isn't a lot of imagery to be gained from this. ^_~ Really.

Attempted drabble. Ray/Ray. 100 words. It's a mind thing, I swear.



"Come on, let me see what I'm working with," Kowalski muttered. He pulled back and Ray forced himself to strip and stand. This was not normal. Normal was quick, hard, against-the-door, wall, fridge, counter, stall, strip-and-grip, over and done in sixty seconds.

Normal wasn't naked and looking.

Kowalski snickered, Ray snorted back at him, and then they were laughing into each other's mouths.

Comments

[merelyn.livejournal.com]

Aww. That was cute. :)

[rjm-257.livejournal.com]

Thank you. ^__^

[shayheyred.livejournal.com]

I really enjoyed this. It'short, but punchy.

[rjm-257.livejournal.com]

I'm glad you liked it. ^__^ Thank you.

[akite.livejournal.com]

That says a lot in 100 words. Good job!

[rjm-257.livejournal.com]

Thank you kindly.

[china_shop]

Aw, this made me smile. Very nice! :)

[sage]

*giggles*

I can so totally see that.

[rjm-257.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much.

[rjm-257.livejournal.com]

It's all in the mind. ^_~ Thank you.

[laughingacademy.livejournal.com]

Man, I love the last line!

[rjm-257.livejournal.com]

Thank you. ^__^

[aerye.livejournal.com]

Catching up, catching up--this is lovely and sweet!