Ditto--I noticed the description first time, and then was like AAAAH! when it came up again at the end. It's perfectly clear what happened, and it's lovely the way you parallel the water and the ink, and how the ink froze over when it wasn't supposed to, and how the lake, unfortunately, didn't freeze nearly enough.
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Date: 2005-01-12 09:02 pm (UTC)