I like the way you didn't come right out and say what had happened -- you let the story tell that for you.
Thank you. That's something I've always struggled with, the urge to inundate readers with information that they could figure out themselves if I gave them the chance to.
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Date: 2005-01-14 08:50 am (UTC)Thank you. That's something I've always struggled with, the urge to inundate readers with information that they could figure out themselves if I gave them the chance to.