Date: 2005-03-22 02:20 am (UTC)
This is my favorite part:

She hadn’t closed the door to the adjoining bathroom all the way, because she’d only expected to be in there a minute or so. Take the test, see she wasn’t pregnant, toss it in the trash. Four, five minutes tops.....That was close to half an hour ago, Stella figured, though she couldn’t say for certain.

It's elegantly written, I think.

Nice job! (Poor offscreen RayK! Waaa!)
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