Date: 2005-03-22 03:15 am (UTC)
God, this is so well done. Just. Whoa. This here:

The air clicked on and off through two cycles before either of them said anything else.

...is an amazing detail, and really made that scene for me.

As for this:

Because what was Ray to her now - her ex? Ray Kowalski? Stella looked at Fraser, at his grey-blue eyes that were watching her so intently. “Your Ray,” she said quietly, after a moment’s pause.

::ADORES::
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