This is great! The Ray you wrote sounds much like the Ray in my head and I like that Ray a lot.
My only issue is that you ended too soon; I want to know what happens next. (Yes, I do know that authors end stories when the stories are done, but you can't blame a girl for trying.)
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Date: 2005-03-30 01:39 am (UTC)My only issue is that you ended too soon; I want to know what happens next. (Yes, I do know that authors end stories when the stories are done, but you can't blame a girl for trying.)