Date: 2006-02-11 02:41 am (UTC)
Oh man, there is so much here that I love, but then I got to the last line and it absolutely killed me and basically knocked all the rest out of my head for a bit. I am in awe of the sheer stark perfection of that line.

I also love Ray's observation about Frannie, because, yes.

This is just wonderful!
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