Oh, I love this. Your Frannie is wonderful (What did he think she was, dyspeptic or something?). And your Fraser ("I wouldn't want to interfere with a thing." and "Oh, then what very good advice."). And your RAY ("They ask about me?" and "Izzat so," Ray said in a small voice. and "Okay a) that is a permanent marker, b) I was drunk at the time and stupid and 3) shut up."). Also, I please want to see what Ray looks like after Frannie was done with her drawing. I really, really want to see that.
The whole thing was so funny and you've got the voices down and you've got Due South down and please, please write your stories as long as you like. Or longer.
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Date: 2006-02-10 09:22 pm (UTC)Also, I please want to see what Ray looks like after Frannie was done with her drawing. I really, really want to see that.
The whole thing was so funny and you've got the voices down and you've got Due South down and please, please write your stories as long as you like. Or longer.