Badfic Challenge - strangecobwebs

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Title: Sweet Tooth
Pairing: Ray/Ray; Fraser/Fraser's hand (sorry, no threesome...)
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: dentists; really bad stereotypes; the "it's not beta-ed" part is true
Prompt: by china_shop
Veccyo is a SCAREY vamp with a soar tooth (v mean),a nd Rayks a dentist. Watch the sparx fly when their goin' at it -- rince & spit, if u kno wot i mean. Ha ha! (Frasers = dental nurse, so dont worry, theirs mounteis too! Hawt 3way. NC-17!!


I was inspired(?) last night by the so-much-smarter-and-more-creative-than-me people who have posted so far.

So my fic can be found here. The username is dartagnan379 (sorry it's a little complicated, but originally I was going to be the only one who needed it) and the password is vecchio. Just start at the top (I moved the sent ones to the inbox) and keep clicking next. If it's too complicated to do it this way, I can post it here; it'll just take a little while. But let me know and I will. :)

So, uh, enjoy?

ETA: It can also be found here.

Date: Tue, 11 Apr 2006 19:12:38 -0700 (PDT)
From: "strangecobwebs" <strangecobwebs@yahoo.com> Add to Address Book Add Mobile Alert
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Subject: ds_flashfiction Badfic Challenge
To: dartagnan379@yahoo.com

Yo, so did you see my prompt? I have to make Vecchio a vampire! I've never even seen an episode of Buffy, so my only frame of reference is, you know, Halloween costumes. How the hell do I make him a vampire?

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Date: Tue, 11 Apr 2006 19:20:29 -0700 (PDT)
From: "d'Artagnan" <dartagnan379@yahoo.com> Add to Address Book Add Mobile Alert
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To: "strangecobwebs" <strangecobwebs@yahoo.com>

haha yeah, i saw that. it's easy though! I mean, it's supposed to be bad, right? so start with something like this:

"This is Dr. Kowalski, may I help you?"
"Dr. Kowalski, yes, I hope you can." The voice was slightly impeded, but it still managed to be the sexiest voice Ray had ever heard. Ray also detected a slight accent, one that reminded him just a little of his home neighborhood and the Polish accents there. "I have an awful toothache and I'd like to come in for an appointment. The only problem is, I can't come in during the day. It'll have to be after dark."
"Hmm. Well, can you come in tonight? Around seven?" So it probably wasn't the best idea Ray had ever had, inviting some random guy in for an appointment only at night, but damn, that was a sexy voice. And no one ever made smart decisions when they were half-hard after hearing a sentence.
"Yes, that vould be perfect. Thank you, Doctor."
"What's your name? Have you been here before?"
"My name is Ray Vecchio, and no, I don't believe I have been to you before. But I've gotten some very good recommendations."
"Ok. Then we'll see you at seven, Mr. Vecchio."
"Thank you," Mr. Sexy said and hung up the phone.
Ray hung up and sat back in his chair. He tried to will away his erection before he had to stand up. This would certainly be an interesting night. Dentists didn't really get much of those, so this was kind of exciting.

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Date: Tue, 11 Apr 2006 19:39:48 -0700 (PDT)
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To: "d'Artagnan" <dartagnan379@yahoo.com>

OMG! You gave him the Transylvania accent! Good lord... *evil grin* Just for that, I have to do this:


Ray was in the examining room prepping for this mysterious patient when he heard the front door open and then Fraser's and Mr. Sexy's voices.
"Ray?" Fraser said tentatively behind him.
"Yes, Fraser?"
Fraser cleared his throat. He looked nervous for some reason. "Ah, your patient is here."
"Thanks."
Ray went out to the waiting room to get Mr. Sexy. He stopped short when he saw him. Sexy Vecchio sat on the couch reading a magazine. He had thinning short black hair and a pale, pale face. Ray had thought Italians had darker skin. But that wasn't even that odd. What was really weird were his clothes. He was wearing black tuxedo pants and a white tuxedo shirt with a red cummerbund and a black cape. He looked like he was dressed up as a magician for Halloween or something. Ray smiled to himself as he wondered where his magic wand was. Heh, I bet I can find his magic wand.
Ray cleared his throat. "Mr. Se- Vecchio? Are you ready?"
"Certainly, Doctor," Vecchio answered with a smile. It was a nice smile. Ray always noticed people's teeth, since he was a dentist. Vecchio had nice, strong, white teeth.
His patient followed him back and took a seat where Ray gestured. "Now, what seems to be the problem today?" Ray asked.
"Vell, this tooth here," he pointed. "It hurts vhen I eat something sveet."
"Ah. Sounds like a cavity. Why don't you lean back here, and I'll take a look." Ray pushed the button on the chair so that Vecchio was lying almost horizontally.
Ray leaned in close to get a look at the tooth. But then he glanced up and caught Vecchio's gaze. Their eyes met and the connection was electric. Ray couldn't stop himself from leaning down and inspecting Vecchio's mouth with his own tongue, but his patient didn't seem to mind. He leaned up and grabbed Ray's blond head in his hands. Their tongues met and they were lost in the ecstasy of the kiss.

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Date: Tue, 11 Apr 2006 19:45:43 -0700 (PDT)
From: "d'Artagnan" <dartagnan379@yahoo.com> Add to Address Book Add Mobile Alert
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To: "strangecobwebs" <strangecobwebs@yahoo.com>

a magician?? you see someone with a transylvanian accent, who will only come out at night, dressed like that and you immediately think MAGICIAN??? you're fucking nuts, dude. love the kissing though, haha. it needs good sex now.

Ray climbed up and laid down on top of Vecchio. Vecchio grabbed Ray's hips and tried to pull them even closer. Their cocks were rubbing up against each other through their clothes. Vecchio tore his mouth from Ray's and kissed a line to Ray's ear. Then he sucked the lobe into his mouth and bit gently. Ray moaned.
Ray pushed himself up and reached down between them to pull down Vecchio's zipper. He reached in and pulled out an unbelievably hard and thick cock. Vecchio was moaning and trying to reach Ray's equivalent member. It was the most incredible feeling when their cocks met.
But it wasn't enough. Ray sat up enough to pull Vecchio's pants down all the way, then he did the same with his own. He looked around wildly, and then spotted what he was looking for even though Vecchio's hand on his dick was distracting him. Ray reached over to the tray standing by the chair and grabbed a tube.
When he started to squirt something on his fingers, Vecchio asked breathlessly, "Vhat's that?"
"Does it matter if it works?" Ray asked as he reached for Vecchio's beautiful, round ass. Vecchio just moaned as Ray's fingers entered him. He squirmed and pushed himself further down onto Ray's fingers.
"More," Vecchio gasped. "You!"
Ray squirted more stuff on his hand and lubed up his own cock. Then he swiftly thrusted into Vecchio. They both cried out at how good it felt.

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Date: Tue, 11 Apr 2006 19:46:45 -0700 (PDT)
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To: "d'Artagnan" <dartagnan379@yahoo.com>

Oh no... You didn't... Just tell me you didn't.

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Date: Tue, 11 Apr 2006 19:47:32 -0700 (PDT)
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didn't what? [insert angelic smile here]

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Date: Tue, 11 Apr 2006 19:49:08 -0700 (PDT)
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To: "d'Artagnan" <dartagnan379@yahoo.com>

You gave them toothpaste for lube, didn't you? That's just...

There are no words.

Except: EW.

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Date: Tue, 11 Apr 2006 19:50:04 -0700 (PDT)
From: "d'Artagnan" <dartagnan379@yahoo.com> Add to Address Book Add Mobile Alert
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To: "strangecobwebs" <strangecobwebs@yahoo.com>

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

you would've if i hadn't.

yo, what about fraser? isn't he around?

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Date: Tue, 11 Apr 2006 20:05:11 -0700 (PDT)
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Oh, yeah. Fraser's around. This is just for you and your masturbation kink.


Fraser stepped back from the slightly ajar door of the examining room. He was sure that Ray would never have wanted him to see… that. He tried to take one more step back, but was only able to take a step forward, back to the door. The urge to look was irresistible. He was already hard from the quick glance he'd seen of Ray's penis when Ray was taking off his pants. (Fraser had long desired his boss, but was fearful of the penalties for sexual harassment in the workplace, so he had kept his love a secret.)
Fraser peeked back into the room. His eyes widened and his own erection got even harder. Ray was thrusting into Mr. Vecchio hard and fast. It was so illicitly exciting to watch. Fraser couldn't see much of Mr. Vecchio, but he could see Ray's face. His eyes were closed and his mouth was open as he took deep, heaving gasps. Mr. Vecchio was moaning louder and louder as Ray's thrusts grew ever more erratic. Then it looked like Ray was coming. He cried out loudly. Ray had never looked more beautiful than he did while he was coming.
Fraser turned and went into the bathroom down the hall. As soon as he was safely locked inside, he put his own hand down his pants and stroked his hot, thick penis. It didn't take very long; he kept seeing Ray's face in his mind. He bit his lip to keep from shouting as he came, and when he calmed a bit, he realized he tasted blood. Fraser leaned back against the door of the bathroom. He really did try hard not to consider his boss in a sexual manner, but after tonight, all that effort would be wasted. He would never rid himself of the images of Ray, his penis, and his _expression as he came.

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Date: Tue, 11 Apr 2006 20:09:56 -0700 (PDT)
From: "d'Artagnan" <dartagnan379@yahoo.com> Add to Address Book Add Mobile Alert
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To: "strangecobwebs" <strangecobwebs@yahoo.com>

...mmmmmasturbation.... (Even if it does end with: He would never rid himself of the images of Ray, his penis, and his _expression as he came.) *rolls eyes at Fraser*

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Date: Tue, 11 Apr 2006 20:11:14 -0700 (PDT)
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Subject: Sweet Tooth (is what I've decided to call it)
To: "d'Artagnan" <dartagnan379@yahoo.com>

*G* I thought you'd like that.

Would you mind beta-ing this when I put it all together?

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Date: Tue, 11 Apr 2006 20:12:26 -0700 (PDT)
From: "d'Artagnan" <dartagnan379@yahoo.com> Add to Address Book Add Mobile Alert
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hehehe sweet tooth! i like it!

and i'll beta it if you want but, um, hi, I WROTE HALF OF IT.

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Date: Tue, 11 Apr 2006 20:14:18 -0700 (PDT)
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To: "d'Artagnan" <dartagnan379@yahoo.com>

Oh. Right. I knew that. Well, thanks for the help then! And it's supposed to be bad. It doesn't need a beta, right?

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Date: Wed, 12 Apr 2006 06:31:21 -0700 (PDT)
From: "d'Artagnan" <dartagnan379@yahoo.com> Add to Address Book Add Mobile Alert
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To: "strangecobwebs" <strangecobwebs@yahoo.com>

you're unhinged if you think this doesn't need to be beta-ed. good luck finding someone who can do something with it...

Sorry for making it too confusing.