Hilarious, starting with the Author's Notes with the different typography for the internal thoughts of three different characters--mwahahahaha! We've seen writers do that in all seriousness.
I love the "we can't have sex in the voodoo community," and Ray's wishing Fraser was a man, and "nectar of Ray" and "orgasmic fluid"...and then Vecchio's internal monologue, too. Hee! So bad it's good.
He held out one prim hand to the handsome, lithe Ray with the spiky hair and the leather jacket and the very hard-core motorcycle boots (though there was not a motorcycle in view).
Evil...you know that? You are *evil* in the best way!
"Ray," he said again. "Don't hate me. I am meant to be a woman, which is why I went to the Vodun community. But when I met you, things went all awry and now I am confused. I still want to be a woman, but right now," and he pulled out his cock from his pink silken panties, "I want to fuck you with THIS."
Bwahaha! Fraser's confused? You don't say. :) Love this! And Dieff, Deif, Dief, whoever...what a great way to answer the challenge in every particular. You :win: at Bad!Fic.
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Date: 2006-04-17 09:20 pm (UTC)I love the "we can't have sex in the voodoo community," and Ray's wishing Fraser was a man, and "nectar of Ray" and "orgasmic fluid"...and then Vecchio's internal monologue, too. Hee! So bad it's good.
He held out one prim hand to the handsome, lithe Ray with the spiky hair and the leather jacket and the very hard-core motorcycle boots (though there was not a motorcycle in view).
Evil...you know that? You are *evil* in the best way!
"Ray," he said again. "Don't hate me. I am meant to be a woman, which is why I went to the Vodun community. But when I met you, things went all awry and now I am confused. I still want to be a woman, but right now," and he pulled out his cock from his pink silken panties, "I want to fuck you with THIS."
Bwahaha! Fraser's confused? You don't say. :) Love this! And Dieff, Deif, Dief, whoever...what a great way to answer the challenge in every particular. You :win: at Bad!Fic.