Date: 2006-07-01 12:26 pm (UTC)
I love your word usage and imagery in this - so crisp and clean. Just right.

Looking at it as a prelude for your [livejournal.com profile] out_of_con_txt fic just makes that situation look even more disastrous, though...

Immediately after reading this I thought, "well, that makes sense, Ray is going for Kowalski because he can cope with damage and has the relief of thinking that it won't make too much of a difference there."

Then I kicked myself and thought, "actually, thing is, Kowalski's a guy, so Ray wouldn't think he needed protection, not in that way."

What with Vecchio, Kowalski and Stella all being in a bad way, I'm kind of worried what's going on with Fraser in the world of these fics!
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