I love the way you keep things somewhat ambiguous until the end. Is Ray there, or is he an image of desire in Fraser's brain?
Thank you SO much, Shay! That's exactly what I was trying to do! I don't think I succeeded, entirely, so it's wonderful to read your comment and know that *someone* knew where I was trying to go! :)
In many ways you and Rowan have come (no pun) at this from different sides, and somehow they make sense together, as well as separately. All I can say to you is thank you, thank you.
Isn't that hilarious? I read Rowan's right after I posted mine and thought....argh! She nailed it. (Fortunately, it's not a competition. *G*) But I did think it was cool that we were both thinking along those lines.
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Date: 2003-05-14 08:56 pm (UTC)Thank you SO much, Shay! That's exactly what I was trying to do! I don't think I succeeded, entirely, so it's wonderful to read your comment and know that *someone* knew where I was trying to go! :)
In many ways you and Rowan have come (no pun) at this from different sides, and somehow they make sense together, as well as separately. All I can say to you is thank you, thank you.
Isn't that hilarious? I read Rowan's right after I posted mine and thought....argh! She nailed it. (Fortunately, it's not a competition. *G*) But I did think it was cool that we were both thinking along those lines.
And thank YOU. It's my pleasure. :)