I know I'm a little behind the game here, but this was just so luscious. And this was my favorite line - Which was worse? Dead and cold or alive and burning?
Hey, it's never to late for feedback in my book. :) it's hard to keep up with these.
I thought about cutting that line a couple of times, but I really wanted it. At one point I searched a thesaurus for a more painful way to say "burning". When one of the synonyms was "flaming", I laughed myself sick. *G*
But Fraser doesn't have to worry because Ray's got things well in hand. *g*
Yeah, I like to think Ray makes up for all the lonely years. (Translation: sex ALL the time.) *G*
Thanks for your kind comments. I really appreciate them.
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Date: 2003-05-15 09:10 pm (UTC)Hey, it's never to late for feedback in my book. :) it's hard to keep up with these.
I thought about cutting that line a couple of times, but I really wanted it. At one point I searched a thesaurus for a more painful way to say "burning". When one of the synonyms was "flaming", I laughed myself sick. *G*
But Fraser doesn't have to worry because Ray's got things well in hand. *g*
Yeah, I like to think Ray makes up for all the lonely years. (Translation: sex ALL the time.) *G*
Thanks for your kind comments. I really appreciate them.