Oh, you HAD to do this to me right as I was going to sleep, didn't you! Tchawww.
Wow, okay, I love this. I love "Odds". And there is NEVER ENOUGH OF THE ENDING. And I love this version of it. I love being so far inside Ray's head, his voice was narrating it for me. I loved the doubts, the flow of this thoughts - it was so natural, I didn't even realize it wasn't...him. You know what I mean?
Did he - did that mean he's clueless, or - he's not moving, so screw it, time to go
I love that, I love that, because it's so...fuck, how do you get inside their heads like that? Seriously. So perfectly Ray.
And the kiss, God, the kiss. Trying it out, not to spook Fraser, and then going for it...just... Oh, man. So wonderful.
And Fraser, trying to get Ray even as Ray is trying to get Fraser... Man. Yeah. That's the good stuff.
I'm not coherent and I NEED TO SLEEP but I love this. I'm going to re-read it tomorrow. Several times...
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Date: 2006-08-09 02:48 am (UTC)Wow, okay, I love this. I love "Odds". And there is NEVER ENOUGH OF THE ENDING. And I love this version of it. I love being so far inside Ray's head, his voice was narrating it for me. I loved the doubts, the flow of this thoughts - it was so natural, I didn't even realize it wasn't...him. You know what I mean?
Did he - did that mean he's clueless, or - he's not moving, so screw it, time to go
I love that, I love that, because it's so...fuck, how do you get inside their heads like that? Seriously. So perfectly Ray.
And the kiss, God, the kiss. Trying it out, not to spook Fraser, and then going for it...just... Oh, man. So wonderful.
And Fraser, trying to get Ray even as Ray is trying to get Fraser... Man. Yeah. That's the good stuff.
I'm not coherent and I NEED TO SLEEP but I love this. I'm going to re-read it tomorrow. Several times...