The dialogue is wonderful! From the first line all the way to the end, just great. You use the canon very good way.
"We're not opposites, Ray; we have a lot in common, it might not be obvious but we both have similar values, we both feel loyalty is important and duty..."
Nods. I really think they have a lot in common. Thanks so much for writing and posting!
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Date: 2006-08-12 12:37 pm (UTC)"We're not opposites, Ray; we have a lot in common, it might not be obvious but we both have similar values, we both feel loyalty is important and duty..."
Nods. I really think they have a lot in common. Thanks so much for writing and posting!