The "what do you tell him" section was one of the first two written -- I knew very clearly how that (and the first section) should be. And your description of the last as poignant makes me gleeful -- that's so very much the feeling I wanted to convey. Because Ray has both won and lost something very precious.
And thank you -- I know you don't like to stray these days!
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Date: 2006-08-14 04:12 am (UTC)The "what do you tell him" section was one of the first two written -- I knew very clearly how that (and the first section) should be. And your description of the last as poignant makes me gleeful -- that's so very much the feeling I wanted to convey. Because Ray has both won and lost something very precious.
And thank you -- I know you don't like to stray these days!