Date: 2006-09-01 09:40 pm (UTC)
Fantastic! I loved reading this. Not used to Frannie's POV but this one was real good. And I loved the relationship between Ray and Frannie. 'Cos despite the stuff that happens in dS, you can so tell how close they are so it's nice to see how people believe it all started. Really enjoyed it!

He knows about her feelings for Paul. He likes to tease her. Sometimes he’s looking out the window, saying that Paul is coming. Then, after five minutes, when her cheeks are hot and her heart is racing, he grins at her and says, “Gotcha!”

SO RAY!!! lol
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