Date: 2006-09-28 06:24 pm (UTC)
Awww...so wonderful. Ray should be the one pursued for a change. And even though your OCs are great, Fraser's definitely the one who should "get his man."

The romantic dinner upstairs, pre-planned? Yay! And the kisses! *swoons*

But. So many times he’d started to talk forgetting Fraser wasn’t at his side anymore, and picked up the phone and dialled the Consulate, and sometimes, still, if he wasn’t thinking properly, he’d drive that way to pick up a man and a half-wolf who weren’t there.

Ouch! Perfectly stated! It would have been exactly this way if Fraser had left.

Such great character moments here:

I’m ok with campfires and dehydrated meat products,” he said, because he was and he really didn’t want any misunderstandings.

“I’m quite fond of pizza and room service,” Fraser said, nodding.


Three great dates, progressively better. Hooray for you for bringing Fraser back to him!!!!

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