Date: 2006-10-06 08:26 am (UTC)
i have two main responses here, the first being "awww, Dief" and general squishy puppylove type noises (and him hitting Fraser with his tail! he totally would, too. oh, Dief), and the second being "oh, Fraser". because, ow. i actually physically winced at the matter-of-fact observation about the lightbulb flickering, and Fraser just being so... constricted (though "Ma worries" is a total dialogue winner) and just... it makes me want to go watch CotW so I can see that look on his face in the ice field. I can't believe this is only two-hundred-some words - you pack a LOT of character in here, Joan. Great piece.
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