Fuck. Oh wow, that is beautiful, and so brilliant, and I can see him, layered with the poem in a truly wonderful way and just gah. The sadness, the twitchiness! You taken a damn good poem and made it so. fucking Ray! Oh, I love this, loveitloveitloveit! *fangirls*
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Date: 2006-11-03 11:59 am (UTC)